feel like the high pitched violin or whatever it is needs a 90s whistle subtly accompanying it to make it sharper and more dre
else, very nice beat
Thank you I appreciate the feedback
im glad you enjoyed the track
WAR! Heall yeah! Realest rap I heard in a while, needs better mix though, and better microphones, I can barely hear what you're saying.
Hook yourself up with a good rapper and you'll find success
Great, but as he said v
This kind of melody could be done so much better. It needs to have more exciting bassy polyrythmic sounds early on to keep the listener interested. I'd say you revisit it and make it what it should have been.
Then again I can't talk, my stuff is shit.
Thanks for the review. I quite like how it is, but maybe I'm just too close to it.
I might go back to it in future to see if I can improve it.
i love you
seemed like it was building up to a drop but it never did, otherwise it's good
Lol thanks. n i know what you mean.
pretty cool nice and rlaxxing
That's how it was planned to be.
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